I will provide my new version here as well.
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Remember to bring a copy on paper to class for your performance. Good luck!
A place for English 11 students from the Pearson Adult Learning Centre in New Westminster, BC, Canada to read work in progress, critique, and ask or answer questions (of other students and of the teacher).
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Here I Am
Love riding around “the horn” (UBC via Point Grey) on my hybrid bicycle, flying fast down Northwest Marine Drive to the Spanish Bank, stopping at Beyond Bread for fresh baguettes and coffee, following the seawall back to Main Street, the feeling you get when you return home tired from a 40 kilometer ride.
Loved my old-style racing frame, but now prefer livelier aluminum. Loved taking my kids for a ride on the back of my bike, but now they ride their own.
Look at life as a ride full of potholes and bumps; know that smooth roads are the exception.
—100 words
HERE I AM
Love enjoying rain’s freshness on fall’s first day, smelling the first snow in winter (the second one’s too much), hoping and longing for spring’s first flower in our park, waiting for months for the first day of vacation, the feeling you get when time is not important anymore.
Loved spending summers by the seaside with my family, but now only my father is alive. Loved daydreaming about time-travel, but today I realized that only the present is important.
Looked at life as a spiral circle; know that life even though the same every day bring changes.
99 words
Love enjoying a cup of fresh coffee on the balcony, picking fresh tomatoes in the front yard (with a fear of spiders), reading a fascinating story in a park, walking along the Fraser River after a meal, the feeling that happy is an attitude and a well lived life is our goal.
Loved leaning on my parents’shoulders, but they becoming weaker while I am getting stronger. Loved travelling around the world, but I could not get a chance to accomplish the dream.
Look at life as a cup of rich tea; taste bitter for the first sip but feel multi-flavors when we went through a lot.
-----101 words
Here I am
Love walking down the path beside trees, treading on the dried autumn leaves, listening to footsteps (with rustling sound) , looking at far mountains standing in front of me, the feeling you get when life is easy and simple.
Loved dinning with mom and dad on holidays or family union days, but it’s just too far to be back. Loved talking on the phone with friends all night long, but we are so busy with our families.
Look life as arrows, go directly to the end; we will never have any chance to live the same lives again.
-- 99 words
Here I Am
Love being with my family on the weekend , having a good time with them, caring, sharing everything with each of us, helping my mother with house work, working with my brother with his homework,running around the park with my sister, smelling the freshness of air in the early morning.
Loved playing with my father, but he is not alive anymore to play hide and seek with me. Loved seeing my best childhood's friend, but now she lives far away from here.
Look at life as a Ferris Wheel, sometimes it goes up, sometimes it goes down.
Here I Am
Love relaxing at my favorite spot in the yard, playing with Max (a black German shepherd dog) on the grass, picking fresh fruits from the tree we grew in the yard, listening my favorite songs while do the house work, the feeling you have when the nature in harmony with eventing.
Loved playing outside all day, but now prefer stay at home. Loved go out with my best friend, but now they are far away from me in China.
Looked at life as a meander river that the future is not flat; know that even ordinary but full of challenges. (100 words)
Here I Am
Love reminding me in each depth of night, telling me that I am from the long distance orient and over the pacific ocean to the west, beginning a new life in a fresh and peaceful place, experiencing and enjoying different color and culture, the feeling you get when you go away your original land.
Loved being cared by my grandmother, but now she is staring at me from heaven . Loved playing innocently with my inner girlfriends, but now we are innocents’ mother.
Look at life as a kitchen, we have to taste different flavours no matter you would like or not.
Here I Am
love waking up in the morning with my fiance beside me, preparing his favorite grill cheese sandwich with coffee latte, listening to the original Filipino music ( playing in the cassette), imagining how perfect life would be to have children and love, the feeling you get when you know that everything is gonna be okay.
Loved going out with my friends on the weekends, but have to work to support my needs. Loved bringing my niece to the play ground, but am thousand miles to be there with them.
Look at life as a piece of art; express yourself each day without worry.
-102 words
Here I am
Love reading stories after a long day of journey, having snuggles, wiggles and wriggles in the cool breeze of the night, tucking in (just right in bed), under covers, feeling the audience expectations of the strike of the story. The feeling you get when you return home safe.
Loved having parties with my friends on Saturday night, but enjoy other pages in my life. Loved having princess tea parties with my older sister, but she is gone now.
Look at life as a roller coaster, scream, laugh, cry, look forward and enjoy the ride.
(98 words) English 11
Here I Am
Love taking the first kiss with my baby-girl when she wakes up every morning, holding her hands to toddle on the meadow, feeding her anything she likes (less salt and less oil), whispering with her even I can’t understand what she is speaking, the feeling you get when you stroll in a warm sunny garden.
Loved living in my hometown, but it is smoggy year-around. Loved hard-working like what I did, but it is difficult to find a similar job indeed.
Look at life as a marathon, you don’t know if you win or lose until you reach the end.
-100 words
Jonathan
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