Descriptive Essays

Post your final drafts here as a comment. Please check your work carefully before posting!

Note that it is not a requirement, but I encourage you to share your writing with your classmates.

Here is a link to my fifth draft of "Hiking with John." I changed the title back as "A Chance Encounter" felt cliched.

Brad's Third Draft: "A Chance Encounter"

Here's a link to the file where my changes and comments are available to view. Save a copy to your own computer if you wish. File is in Word 2003 for XP. Make sure you select "reviewing pane" to see the comments.

"A Chance Encounter": Third draft of the essay (working title: "Hiking with John")