A place for English 11 students from the Pearson Adult Learning Centre in New Westminster, BC, Canada to read work in progress, critique, and ask or answer questions (of other students and of the teacher).
We'd like to pick Aram and his cousin,Mourad to make a comparison:
Similarity first.They 're both children: one is nine and another is maybe thirteen which means their world is full of "magnificence"and curiosity,for example,they are insanely crazy about horses;As numbers of "the garoghlanian family",they are both"poor" and they don't have money;however, they are "famous for their honesty for eleven centuries";they also have the same believe system.
On the other hand,a couple years older makes Mourad more mature than Aram. Mourad always has "a way with horses,farmers and dogs";he makes decisions while Aram carries out;he is much crazier than Aram since he could "steal" a horse and "roar " when he rides it;obvious he is smarter than Aram.
We'd like to pick Aram and his cousin,Mourad to make a comparison:
ReplyDeleteSimilarity first.They 're both children: one is nine and another is maybe thirteen which means their world is full of "magnificence"and curiosity,for example,they are insanely crazy about horses;As numbers of "the garoghlanian family",they are both"poor" and they don't have money;however, they are "famous for their honesty for eleven centuries";they also have the same believe system.
On the other hand,a couple years older makes Mourad more mature than
Aram. Mourad always has "a way with
horses,farmers and dogs";he makes decisions while Aram carries out;he is much crazier than Aram since he could "steal" a horse and "roar " when he rides it;obvious he is smarter than Aram.